Breadkit's Legacy - Warriors Trollfic (Probably PG-13)

[Cloudskip]

Oh look Bella's here to ruin lives of fictional characters again. This time as a complete joke.

Anyways I've decided to upload a Trollfic because why the heck not. The people on Xat seem to like some of the names i'm looking at you owl

Anyways, let's start with the alliances.




    Thunderclan Alliances.



Leader: Goodstar - Friendly brown tabby tom with wide yellow eyes.
Deputy: Stevehawk - Evil-looking guy. I think he's a blood red cat or something.
Medicine Cat: Monkeytail - Beautiful light brown she-cat with purple eyes.
   Apprentice: Normalpaw - Grey she-cat with green eyes. Ew normie.

    Warriors:

Bloodclaw - White tom with red paws. Outcast.
Shiningbeauty - Light grey she-cat with blonde highlights, beautiful blue eyes.
Llamablaze - Brown she-cat with yellow eyes. Goodstar's sister.
   Apprentice: Plumpaw - Light purple she-cat with amber eyes.
Heartburn - Light ginger she-cat with red across her chest.
Budlight - Grey tabby tom with white underbelly, obbsessed with liquid catmint.
   Apprentice: Ricepaw - White tom with light brown spots. Green eyes.

    Queens and kits:

Moonshine, mother of Budlight's kits. - Grey she-cat with blue eyes.
   Kits:
   Salmonkit - Red tom with large green eyes
   Hardkit - Grey tabby tom with blue eyes.
   Scotchkit - Ginger she-cat with blue eyes.
   Palekit - Light ginger with grey spots.



Brightlight, mother of Stevehawk's kits. - Golden she-cat.
   Kits:
   Breadkit - Handsome sandy brown tom with brown eyes.
   Toastkit - Dark brown tom with blood red eyes. Outcast even to the outcast.



I'm too lazy to put other alliances right now, I'll update it later. But now we'll have chapter 1.


CHAPTER 1: A start of a legacy or something


Today was a great day today, the birds were singing, flowers were blooming, and Breadkit was outside.

The tom praced happily around the camp, his eyes gazed in two different directions. It was a beautiful day today. Breadkit dropped and rolled around in the dirt, getting his pelt dirty. He flopped around like a fish until his brother Toastkit stepped besides him, narrowing his blood red eyes. Breadkit smiled stupidly.

"Oh hey!"

"... Hey..."

"How's it going, bro?"

"The clan hasn't burned to ashes, so I guess good."

"Wow, thanks Edgekit."

Toastkit hissed at the nickname, and barreled into Breadkit, trying to rake him claws against Breadkit's eyes. Breadkit simply kicked his brother and it was over. Toastkit toppled to the ground, grumpling. "What the heck is going on here!?" Came a feminine voice. The light brown tom turned to see his mother, Brightlight, running towards him. "Breadkit, what happened?"

"Toastkit tried to kill me again."

"He provoked my rage!" Screamed the tiny kit.

"Shut up." Brightlight hissed, heading towards Toastkit. She hit him in the head with her paw and blood flowed from the kit's head. Brightlight narrowed her eyes and hissed. "Don't you dare mess with your brother, he's special. You aren't. If you hurt him, you are the villian." She hissed, turning away and heading back to the nursery to see Moonshine buried in her four kits.

Toastkit looked like he was about to cry, Breadkit ignored him and ran towards the Medicine Cat's den. Before he could reach the den, an apprentice tumbled into him. He recognized the purple pelt. "Oh, hey Plumpaw." He smiled, and Plumpaw smiled back. "Hey dork, you wanna sneak out?"

"Blunt much? But yeah, of course! But wouldn't we get caught?"

"Nah, you're the deputy's kid. You wouldn't get in trouble. Not one bit."

"What about Normalpaw?"

"My sis? HAH! I'd beat her to a pulp if she tried to get you in trouble."

"Could we bring Ricepaw too?"

Plumpaw shrugged. "Sure, why not. You go wait by where Budlight drinks his liquid catmint and I'll go get him." Breadkit smiled stupidly and tumbled over towards the dead-inside looking tom. "Hello, Budlight." Breadkit mewled, twitching his ears. Budlight's expression immediately lit up, something that didn't even happen with his mate and kits. "Oh, well hello Breadkit! Sneaking out again? Watch out for foxes!" The little kit nodded, a bold expression upon his face. The older tom knew about his weekly sneak-outs, but did nothing to stop it. "Hey, Breadkit!" Plumpaw yelled, Ricepaw lagging behind. It was time to go.


And that's all for now!

[Foxpaw]

Okay, I'm gonna just post and leave.

CHAPTER 2: Adventures in the Forest

Breadkit bounced up and down with glee as he, Plumpaw, and her brother Ricepaw ventured through the forest. The little kit sniffed around the bushes, his brown eyes filled with curiosity. The flowers were so nice! The sky was nice! Everything was nice! Plumpaw looked over her shoulder and smiled, Breadkit noticed the slightest bit of red in her face. Ricepaw simply stayed quiet. He was usually like this, even to Breadkit. Just then, the older tom's nose twitched and he murmured. "Shadowclan and foxes, we should leave and tell Goodstar or Stevehawk..."

"And basically tell them we were out here? No way, bro bro." Plumpaw huffed.

Breadkit scented the scent too, even though he had no idea what they were supposed to smell like. He knew anyways. "Plumpaw, we should go..." The purple she-cat's eyes gazed at him and her eyes softened. "Ugh, fine. Come on." She then turned to leave. Ricepaw ran behind her. Breadkit was about to join them when he saw the strangest thing he's seen since one of his father's demon summoning rituals.

Shadowclan cats were screaming and riding on the backs of foxes like cowboys on bulls. Breadkit's bright brown eyes widened and he screamed, somehow running faster than the foxes. "Come on guys, we need to go, now!" Ricepaw and Plumpaw's eyes widened as well and they began to run as well. After a lot of running, the Shadowclan foxpatrol caught up with the trio of young cats. One of them suddenly grabbed Breadkit by the scruff. The kit screamed out, "hEY! GUyS, HELP!" Plumpaw almost stopped to help, but Ricepaw shouted something to her to make her run towards the camp.

"Okay guys, we got what we wanted, we can go now!" The Shadowclanner that held Breadkit shouted to his gang, and the foxes stopped and started back to Shadowclan territory. Breadkit still continued screaming. The tom holding him whacked him in the head and Breadkit's vision turned to black.


Hours had passed before Breadkit regained conscientiousness. He was in a dark pit, random faces surrounded him. He could see two cats blocking the entrance. "Oh look, it's awake." A monotonous voice came, followed by a voice that sounded like a bell. "Lizardkit, be nice!" Breadkit's vision cleared, and he could see two other kits about the same age as him. The one with the monotone was a pure black tom with golden eyes, the other one was a golden she-cat with enchanting aqua eyes. Breadkit smiled, and jumped up. "Hey!! I'm Breadkit, we seem to be in mortal danger!" He said gleefully. The she-kit chuckled. "Hey, I'm Cutekit. This party pooper here is Lizardkit. I'm from Riverclan and he's from Windclan. I'm guessing you're from Thunderclan?" The tom nodded, and Cutekit laughed. They then started a conversation, Lizardkit not taking much part in it.

Suddenly, the two guards were tossed out of the way and Breadkit and his fellow prisoners were tugged out of the pit, Plumpaw's eyes were widened with worry and fear. Breadkit could see Shadowclan cats, foxes, and the other clans fighting. He could see blood everywhere. "Breadkit, are you okay!? Did they hurt you?" Plumpaw was on the edge of crying. Suddenly, a fox dove in from the side, aiming it's claws at Breadkit. Time almost stopped. The kit braced for impact.
But nothing happened, Breadkit didn't feel any pain, he looked up at the two other kit's expressions, and then turned. There he saw the bloody figure of Plumpaw, her limbs shaking. The she-cat screamed curses at the fox, tears in her eyes. The fox finally fled, and Plumpaw collapsed in the dust, her amber eyes wide with pain. Breadkit screamed and shook his friend's pelt. The purple she-cat smiled, and her body fell limp without a single word. Lizardkit and Cutekit simply stared at the dead body in shock, the sight mentally scarring them.

Breadkit started crying and his claws suddenly turned into snipers. The previously harmless kit was now a killing machine, his gun claws shooting at every fox in sight. Every cat froze at the sight. Breadkit screeched, "This needs to stop now! These foxes killed my friend, this didn't need to happen!" Every cat stared at the now blank eyed Shadowclanners. The one he assumed was leader started to speak. "Thank you, kit, for freeing us. The foxes were creatures from the Dark Forest that controlled us. We're sorry about your friend, but we owe you dearly." He dipped his head, and turned to the other three clans. Breadkit could see Goodstar nodding to the leader, and Stevehawk growled. Brightlight rushed over to him, along with Lizardkit's and Cutekit's mothers, and he was dragged home. His mother was nagging him about going out of camp while Monkeytail checked his wounds. Breadkit noticed Normalpaw carrying Plumpaw's body and he started to cry. He would kill all foxes, every last one.


Woooo that was longer than I expected. I'm just gonna leave it at that.

[Cloudskip]

Chapter 3: In The Eyes of Toast.

It has been about a moon now since Plumpaw's death. The mental image of Normalpaw dropping the body in the middle of camp, followed by his brother's screams and Goodstar's mortified expression of his daughter's dead body filled the kit's head. He had kept Normalpaw company in her depression during this, but he didn't understand why she would act the most out of everyone in the clan. Her constant crying attacks and screams and... thoughts... were somehow worse than her whole family, even though it seemed as though Plumpaw and Normalpaw were bitter rivals. With their differences and outlooks on life, along with Normalpaw's attitude and everything else. Toastkit could only guess she deeply cared for her sister on the inside.

Toastkit shook his head out of his thoughts, finding himself in the Medicine Cat's den. He could see Monkeytail sorting through herbs, where was Normalpaw? Did she disappear? The brown tom began to panic and he ran up to the older medicine cat. "Um, Monke- I mean ma'am... Do you know where Normalpaw went to..?"
"Please, kid, you don't have to call me ma'am, who taught you that?"
"Brightlight, she won't allow me to call her mother. Anyways, answer my question please... If you can..."
Toastkit could see Monkeytail mutter a curse under her breath before she answered. "That girl went to go grab some food to clear her head. She's been getting better recently though, thanks to you. I saw Breadkit trying to give her one of his speeches, but she yelled at him and moved on. I think you're the only one she tolerates these days, besides from me of course." Toastkit couldn't help but smile, he liked the feeling of actually being of use. He was about to go find his friend when Goodstar's yowl echoed through the camp. "OKAY THUNDERCLANNERS, TO THE ROCK O CEREMONIES!"

Monkeytail escorted Toastkit to the clearing, where Brightlight sat with Breadkit. His mother sent the tiny kit a glare, and he stayed beside the medicine cat. They both sat down, and were soon joined by Normalpaw. Toastkit sent the she-cat a smile, and she simply nodded and rubbed his head with her paw, messing up his fur. "It's your time to shine, Toaster." She finally said with a small smile. He nodded with teary eyes and stepped up as Goodstar called his name. "Toastkit, do you hereby accept to train under Thunderclan as an apprentice, and promise to give your life to the clan, even at the cost of your own life?" Goodstar never remembered the actual lines, so he improvised. He did it so often Toastkit never knew the original phrase.
"I do."
"Then by the power invested in me given by Starclan, I name you Toastpaw. Heartburn!" A small light ginger she-cat stood up nervously, her eyes filled with anxiety. "Okay Heartburn, I would give Toastpaw to Bloodclaw over there, but the dude reclined my offer to train him. So your stuck with him, I'm sorry." Heartburn swiftly nodded and stood by the newly-made apprentice. Toastpaw had never gotten to meet the she-cat personally, but he had heard rumors that she was the daughter of a cold-blooded rouge that terrified Riverclan and Shadowclan in the past, but her mother neither confirmed nor denied the rumors, rather ignore them and never speak of them.
"Okay Breadkit, over here." Toastpaw watched his brother walk up proudly towards the leader. Goodstar smiled bowed his head. "Breadkit, from this day forwards until you have earned your warrior name, you shall be known as Breadpaw. I shall pass down my knowledge onto you, and take you on as my apprentice." Breadpaw smiled cheerfully and was smothered in hugs by Brightlight. Stevehawk even smiled of approval for his son. Toastpaw couldn't help but feel alone and left out.
"Okay Toastpaw, I'm happy to be your mentor. We'll start training tomorrow. I expect you to get good rest. I'll make you into the best warrior in Thunderclan if it's the last thing I do." Heartburn said with a bold expression. Toastpaw was at first startled, but nodded and padded off to talk with Monkeytail and Normalpaw.




Also I made a family tree so it won't get all too confusing.

[Foxpaw]

Idk how I'm gonna do POV this time around so I'm just gonna change it every two chapters.


Chapter 4: Elder Stories... From an apprentice...

Surprisingly, Toastpaw had felt okay these last two moons since his apprenticeship. Everyone mostly went along their own business and the tom was glad he didn't have to talk to Brightlight every day. He ignored the fact that Breadpaw was praised at everything he did while Toastpaw merely was given a nod of approval by anyone other than the medicine cats and Heartburn.

Today was a rather boring day, just some training and hunting done early. The dark brown tom sighed was about to join a patrol when Normalpaw ran up to him, she seemed to get better by the day by the looks of it. "Yo, Toaster, can you help me gather herbs? Monkeytail is busy dealing with Budlight's strange sickness, he was throwing up all night." She seemed casual with it, like it happened often. Toastpaw wasn't going to question it. "Um... Okay." He nodded, ears twitching. "Cool, let's go before Breadpaw makes us let him come and show off."

Toastpaw was glad to have Normalpaw as a friend. She actually saw the flaws in Breadpaw, and didn't think he was some perfect angel sent from Starclan themselves. The apprentice sniffed around and dug up some marigold. He gently picked it up and set it down in a leaf pouch to carry it and not have herb taste in his mouth. "Norma, do you wonder why I'm like this to the clan? An outcast even to the outcast?"
His friend stopped digging in the dirt. She looked like she was frozen stiff. She turned and looked him in his blood red eyes. "Toaster, it's best that you don't ask questions like that."
"No! I want to know, I've been traumatized my whole childhood, I think I can handle something like that."
The medicine cat lowered her ears, "Kid-"
"Don't call me kid."
"Okay, sorry... Okay, but it'll be a long story so you should sit down."

"You see... When I was a kit hanging out with Monkeytail because I had no life, she was given a sign. Honestly, it was horrifying to watch. She was shaking on the floor, looking like she was going to die, eyes somewhat glowing. When it finally stopped, she was amazed. She had said that I was meant to be her apprentice-"
"What does this have to do with me?"
"Shush, idiot. A moon later, about the time before you were born, she had an actual prophecy. She had mentioned that fire and tiger shall be reborn, which she told the clan. Everyone assumed that it had to do with the ancient tales of Firestar and Tigerstar and with Brightlight and Stevehawk's children, since there were two of them. You just happened to look like Tigerstar, and Breadpaw more of Firestar. That's most probably the reason the clan treats you like this."

Silence.

"Then why do you hang around me..?" Toastpaw said after a minute of complete silence. "Because if you really are Tigerstar, I want to lead you on the right path, same with Monkeytail. Your mentor, I guess she's on the same page as well..." The brown tom shivered at the thought of Heartburn's training, she set her standards for his training high, and trained almost every day. One time she even allowed claws to see if he could actually use them. Naturally he had gotten in trouble with Goodstar. But all of that aside, she treated him like an actual person and not some thing to be tossed aside and forgotten.

"Should we get back to camp..? It's getting sorta dark..."
"Right behind ya, Toaster."

[Cloudskip]

I'm gonna write a chapter because I'm insanely bored and I don't wanna go back to sleep.

Chapter 5: Rescue.

Breadpaw had been having a great day, he had managed to catch 20 pieces of prey in a day, his personal record. Although it was quiet... Nobody had been there to speak of it. They must all be on patrol, except Monkeytail, who was caring for Budlight. He was just about to leave when a patrol of eight cats walked into camp. Moonshine and Budlight's kits had been apprenticed the day before, they must be returning from the territory tour. Salmonpaw with Stevehawk, Hardpaw with Brightlight, Palepaw with Shiningbeauty, and Scotchpaw with Llamablaze. It was only then did Breadpaw realize that Thunderclan didn't have many warriors, what would happen if someone had a four kit litter again soon? There would be almost no warriors to train unless they took on two apprentices at once. Geez, he should talk to Goodstar about making Ricepaw a warrior soon.

An hour of nothingness followed soon after, and Breadpaw decided to walk through the territory. It was peaceful this time of the day, the night slowly creeping in through the horizon. The colors of the sky were beautiful, a nice orange or pink. His thoughts were soon interrupted by a small voice. "Hey, Mr. Bread!" In a bush nearby was Scotchpaw, who probably had followed him. She was red in the face, but it didn't show much due to her ginger fur. "Scotchpaw, why did you follow me?"
"To protect you against danger!"
"You didn't have to do that, I can defend myself."
"But what if you can't?"
Scotchpaw had a stubborn face, Breadpaw decided to stop arguing. "Fine, come on, but don't expect too much-"
His sentence was interrupted by Scotchpaw scenting the air and dashing off, looking like a blur as she ran. Breadpaw stood wide-eyed for a second before taking off after her. He froze as he saw and recognized two bodies of fur. It was Lizardkit and Cutekit, most likely apprentices now. He thought they were dead for a second judging by the bloody wounds they had. He sighed in relief as Cutepaw awakened. "Guys, guys! Are you okay, speak up!" Breadpaw asked, tossing Scotchpaw aside as he stood by the two apprentices, checking their wounds. Cutepaw couldn't speak, the only thing was terror in her eyes. Breadpaw locked eyes with Scotchpaw, who looked horrified at the sight. "Come on, we need to take them to camp, now."


Breadpaw was pacing around the entrance of the medicine cat's den, anxious with worry for the two cats he and Scotchpaw had carried to camp. The she-cat had tried to comfort him, but failed. Finally, after what seemed like an eternity, Monkeytail arose from the den entrance. "You can see them now, Breadpaw."

The light brown tom walked towards the two cats, Cutepaw was sleeping. It was Lizardpaw who spoke first, his voice having more emotion than last time Breadpaw had seen him. "So, you actually helped us?"
"Yes, what happened?"
"I'd rather not-"
"What. Happened."
Lizardpaw looked a little shocked at the hostility in Breadpaw's voice, and answered reluctantly.
"Me and Cutepa-... We started meeting each other at the border two moons ago when we saw each other at the gathering. I was at the border to see her again, but her mentor had followed. It's new, but Windclan has recently been at war with Riverclan, so obviously he wasn't too friendly. He screamed curses at Cutepaw and I, eventually starting to attack me. She attacked her mentor to defend me, and almost got killed in the process." Lizardpaw looked like he was going to cry, Breadpaw set his head on the apprentice's head, trying to comfort him. "You don't have to-"
"No, I started it and now I'm going to finish it. As we were walking away from the border, near where you found us, I believe, Cutepaw collapsed. I tried to drag her myself to safety, but I fell as well. I failed to protect her... But, as we were dying, Cutepaw told me that she was going to change her name if she was leaving her clan. I asked to what.

"She said to Newpaw. For a new start, or a new life in Starclan."

[Foxpaw]

Woopity woo another chapter because Bella has no life

Chapter 6: Sleep Tight.

The night that followed the events of yesterday felt so long to Breadpaw. He couldn't sleep. It must have taken two hours of just lying there to fall asleep by Scotchpaw and the other apprentices, Toastpaw seperated from the group in a small corner. It didn't take long for a dream to form in Breadpaw's head once he had finally fell asleep.

The light brown tom was in a meadow, the wind in his fur. No one was there. Breadpaw looked around, and stepped forward. As soon as his paw hit the ground, the meadow burst into flames. The apprentice watched in horror as he saw a tiger from the ancient tales rise from the fire. Breadpaw backed away, the fire burning his paws. But before he could run away in a sprint, the tiger sprang at him. Everything hurt. His head, his paws, his eyes, everything. Suddenly, he was nowhere but a dark void with nothing but him in sight.

He simply floated there, his brown eyes closed tight. But a familiar voice calmed him, yet it wasn't one he could recognize. It was a tom's voice. "It's alright, everything's okay. Wake up, the stress is getting to you." Before Breadpaw could speak, he found himself lying in the apprentice's den. Palepaw was shaking him awake. "Breadpaw, are you okay? You looked almost dead!"
"Y-Yeah, I'm fine."
"Dude, you're gonna miss the ceremonies. The two newbies asked if they could join the clan, Ricepaw is also getting his ceremony."


The sunshine was harsh today, but Breadpaw could clearly see Newpaw and Lizardpaw in the crowd. He seated himself by Brightlight out of terror that she'll force him to if he refused. Goodstar was seated on the top of the Great Rock, Stevehawk glaring at the clan with his pitch black eyes. "Ricepaw, step forwards." The white tom stepped forwards, his face showed nervousness. "Ricepaw, do you accept to be loyal to the Warrior Code and Thunderclan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do."
"Then from this day forwards, by the powers of Starclan, you shall be known as Ricetooth. I wish you a long life." Goodstar then turned to Breadpaw, "Breadpaw, step forwards."
The tom was surprised by Goodstar's request, he was being made a warrior..? Now..? He hadn't even had an assessment yet. "Breadpaw, I know you haven't finished training completely, but you are an excellent warrior worthy of your warrior name. Do you accept to remain loyal, even at the cost of your life?"
Breadpaw hesitated. "I do, sir."
"Then by the powers of Starclan, I give you your warrior name. From this day forwards, you shall be known as Breadclaw." Breadclaw stood in shock and happiness, but he could notice the sad expression on his brother's face. The tom had always had pity for him, from the way Brightlight and the Clan treated him. He was glad that Toastpaw had Normalpaw to keep him company.

After that (Since Bella is too lazy to type it out), Lizardpaw was given to Breadclaw to train, and Ricetooth was training Newpaw, who had asked for an offical name change. When everyone went off to do their own thing, Breadclaw noticed Brightlight murmur something to Stevehawk before approaching Toastpaw. "We need to talk." She had said, and Toastpaw reluctantly followed her into the territory. Breadclaw swallowed, what could that be about..? He shook his head and decided to follow them. He could smell fear.

[Cloudskip]

Chapter 7: Irony.

Toastpaw was an idiot for following his mother, she would probably yell at him for falling behind his brother. That's the only she noticed about him, his negatives. She didn't care about him as a son, but as a punching bag. Still, maybe she'd change. Maybe she'd actually apologize for ruining him.

The two had gone a long ways from camp before Brightlight turned around and quickly began speaking. "Toastpaw, have you been having thoughts?"
"... A-About what..?"
"Killing."
Toastpaw was taken aback by his mother's words, and shook his head. "N-No, why would you think that? Why would I kill anyone in this clan?" He had a good reason if so, but he ignored that. Brightlight glared.
"You hesitated."
"W-What! Mom-"
"MA'AM!" Brightlight interrupted harshly. She took a step towards him, Toastpaw quickly stood back. "I'm sorry, my tongue slipped! Ma'am, why would you think I'm a killer?" His mother lowered her ears and spat. "I know who you are! You're Tigerstar, killer of cats. He destroyed families! Clans! He brought the Great Battle long ago! I would have done this a long time ago if Monkeytail hadn't stopped me!"

Toastpaw was about to question what when the golden she-cat sprang at him, pinning him instantly. "Ma'am, stop, plea-!" His words were cut off as Brightlight set her paws on his throat, starting to choke him. Toastpaw's eyes filled with tears as he watched tears running down his mother's face, a devilish smile on her face. "You'll be gone soon! I'm sorry, son! I'm going to be rid of the demon inside you, forgive me!" She screamed, Toastpaw hadn't been more horrified in his life. While she was in the moments of killing him, she was screaming for forgiveness? He would make that point, but he couldn't speak and was choking for air.

Then the weight set on him was suddenly tossed off, Toastpaw lied on the ground in shock, but was still able to see the scene. Breadclaw was on top of Brightlight, his claws slashing at her face. The apprentice couldn't hear what they could say clearing, but Brightlight looked mortified as her favorite son was killing her. Breadclaw screamed something, and bit deeply in her neck, finishing her. Toastpaw started to shake, tears running down his cheeks. When Breadclaw turned to face Toastpaw, he had a small smile on his face and a strange look in his eyes. Toastpaw could see something move at the corner of his eye, and everything turned to black as his bloodied brother headed towards him.



"Toaster, wake up, please!" The sound of crying stirred Toastpaw awake, his blurry vision cleared, and he could see his friend Normalpaw crying. He felt tired, and he couldn't move. Normalpaw threw her face in the tom's dark fur. "Oh thank Starclan you're alive! You were about dead when Scotchpaw brought a patrol to find you... Breadclaw had tried to kill you, he succeeded in killing Brightlight... I'm sorry. He's unconscious in the clearing, Goodstar's exiling him."

This was all happening so fast, how long had he blacked out? Then screaming rang out, Toastpaw finally found the strength to move and ran out of the den. He could see Goodstar restraining Breadclaw to the ground, screaming quietly at him, if that was possible. "Breadclaw, what have you done!? I thought you were the one Starclan sent!" A pained expression was on the leader's face. His apprentice, the one he put hope in, had betrayed him by killing a clan member and almost killing another.

Breadclaw, too, was screaming. "Please, forgive me! I'm Breadclaw, remember? You all love me, right?" He was putting on an act, Toastpaw could easily tell. Goodstar wasn't fooled either, he then screeched with pain. "I, Goodstar, leader of Thunderclan, hereby exile you!"

He released Breadclaw, and knocked him in the head. The light brown tom stopped yelling, and fell unconscious. Tears ran down Goodstar's face as he called Bloodclaw and Stevehawk to help carry Breadclaw out of the territory. Toastpaw could only stand in shock. What the heck had happened to his brother..?

[Foxpaw]

Chapter 8: Filler Episodes and Some Character Development.

Toastpaw had been nervous these last few days, the same with all of Thunderclan.

Where was Breadclaw? What had happened to him to make him resort to murder? He would question his mother's actions, too, but he kinda knew why. Was he really the reincarnation of some so-called demon? He really needed answers, but he couldn't find them with all the tensity within the clan. No one could even answer him, for they had no idea as well.

Toastpaw's thoughts were interrupted by his mentor, Heartburn. "Toastpaw, stop staring off into space, you have to spar." She yelled in somewhat annoyance. Lizardpaw stood by him with questioning, cold eyes. When Breadclaw left, Heartburn had volunteered to teach Lizardpaw as a replacement, despite the stress of having two apprentices.

Toastpaw nodded quickly and faced the jet black tom. "You can go first..." He murmured, intimidated by the tom's expression, although it didn't look too menacing. Lizardpaw nodded and leapt at Toastpaw, throwing him into the dirt. The brown tabby flinched and coughed as his back hit the ground, he immediately kicked up at the other cat and threw him off. Lizardpaw fell on all fours and flung himself at Toastpaw. The wrestling between the two cats looked like a brown and black blur, Toastpaw could catch an approving gaze from Heartburn, and he soon felt the motivation to continue.


Training had finished for the day, and Toastpaw was heading for the Medicine Cat's den when Monkeytail and Normalpaw came walking out, towards the entrance to camp. Normalpaw paused to talk to her friend before she left. "We're going to the Moonstone, sorry we couldn't hang out today..." She sighed, smiled, and went off to join her mentor. Toastpaw groaned, he didn't have anyone to talk to now. He glanced around the camp, everyone seemed to have someone to talk to. Newpaw and Lizardpaw, Shiningbeauty and Goodstar, and all the mentors with their apprentices. The tabby didn't know what to do, then a chilling voice rang behind him. "Good afternoon, Toastpaw."
The tom sprang forwards and turned around, his father Stevehawk stared blankly at him. The red tom was taller than the average cat, so his shadow completely towered over the tiny Toastpaw. He had never really spoken to the deputy, the tom was usually busy and had no time for his kits. When the apprentice did get a glimpse at his father in his kithood, he was arguing with Brightlight about something. "Um... Hello sir."
"Call me father, please."
Toastpaw was at first shocked, but nodded slowly. "Hi dad, may I ask what you are doing..?" The deputy blinked, and shrugged his shoulders. "I thought, since the whole issue with your mother and brother happened, we should probably get to know each other better..." He sounded genuine about it, funnily enough. The brown tom had always been told he was a cold, aggressive cat. Guess you shouldn't believe everything you hear. Toastpaw looked up at the other, and asked somewhat boldly. "Um, si- Dad. How did you and Mom get together..?"
Stevehawk seemed reluctant to reply. "Your mother and I were set up by our parents. Me and Bloodclaw, your uncle, were strong independent toms. But my parents decided that I needed to continue the legacy and set me up with Brightlight, who's father agreed to the situation. Both of our parents died in a battle with Shadowclan, and I thought it was the end of our relationship. Then one day soon after, she came up to me and told me that she was expecting. I didn't want to raise kittens with her, I've seen her personality. It's rather... Aggressive.
"I was stupid enough to put my duties before you two, and I ignored what Brightlight had done to you. Brightlight tried to get me to get back together with her, even slashing me in the face." Stevehawk pointed to a scar on his forehead with his tail. Toastpaw stood in small shock. His mother had done that..? Stevehawk continued. "Then you grew, and time passed. She soon started to ignore me, and vice versa. Then, as you know, she was killed. I've seen her in my dreams since then, trying to warn me of something. I could hear her screaming clearly, but I couldn't make out her words."
Toastpaw had scooted closer to his father, who had gotten teary eyed. "... It's okay that you didn't see us, you were only escaping her."
"I should have taken you with me." He said, his claws sinking into the ground. The brown tom was about to argue, but he noticed the moon in the sky. The half-moon. "What's it like at gatherings?" He said, trying to steer away from the topic at paw. "They're strange, to say the least. Lots of drama, lots of old friends. I personally just chat with the deputies of each clan, Amberflash of Windclan, Firebird of Shadowclan, and Beechroot of Riverclan. I think you'd make some good friends there. I'll take you there next time." His father smiled, and Toastpaw reflected it.
It was nice to have actual family.


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Wowie I'm SUPER late on posting, sorry! I just don't have any muse for anything except for drawing and playing the Sims. But hey, you get Steve Hawkins the cool cat. I love him.

[Cloudskip]

Chapter 9: More drama, why not?


Toastpaw began to feel better these last few days, with everything beginning to settle down. Normaltail had received her Medicine Cat name, and they were both hard at work. The tom began to spend more time with Stevehawk, who told stories and gave friendly lectures to his son about life and work.

It was about a week til the next gathering, and Toastpaw was excited. He expected peace for the rest of his days until Goodstar called for a patrol. "Llamablaze." The brown tom turned to his almost identical sister. "Take whichever cats you please and explore the Windclan territory, they've been awfully quiet."
"But haven't all the clans been quiet recently?" Llamablaze asked, tilting her head.
"Yes, but Windclan never even showed up last Full Moon." The brown tom retorted calmly. Llamablaze sighed and nodded to Toastpaw, "Come on, kiddo." She said. The apprentice almost jumped with joy. Ever since Breadclaw's exile, cats have begun to notice him, and accept him as a cat. The she-cat called to Bloodclaw, and Toastpaw's uncle joined them. The tom's cold red gaze cut through Toastpaw. He kept moving towards Windclan.

Nothing seemed to be there. The scent was stale, and rabbits were everywhere. An uneasy feeling surged through Toastpaw. He opened his mouth to speak to Llamablaze, but Bloodclaw suddenly burst off screaming in rage. The she-cat looked shocked, glanced at Toastpaw with a look that said 'stay here', and sped off after him. The apprentice simply stood there, watching his paws.

Suddenly the screaming stopped, the brown tabby stayed put for a minute before running in the direction Llamablaze and Bloodclaw left. Toastpaw almost screamed when he came upon the scene. The two warrior's bodies were lying across the ground, bunnies nibbling at their corpses. Toastpaw looked up, and saw his brother standing on a tall rock, a rifle in his paws.

"What's up, little bro?" Breadclaw asked, a creepy smile on his face. "What the heck did you do? What happened to you, Breadclaw!" He began to shout in anger. The exiled warrior looked fine, but Toastpaw could see the sanity dripping from his mind. "I got my minor character killing gun and just shot, the rabbits were hungry... As for me, I know what I'm meant to do with my life. I am to bring justice to the clans for their sins, starting with Thunderclan. Mother Brightlight was just justice for what she'd done to you, she deserved it."
Toastpaw shook his head in frustration. "What happened to Windclan!?"
"Rabbits ate them, but some fled to Starclan knows where." Breadclaw rolled his eyes casually and pointed a claw sniper at Toastpaw. "Just stay still and-"

He didn't even finish his sentence before Toastpaw ran for his life. He wanted to grab the warrior's bodies so badly, but he couldn't. He'd be killed. He simply ran back to camp. His vision started to blur, but he could see that Breadclaw wasn't chasing him. His head was ringing when he got to camp, Normaltail ran up to the tom and asked something. Cats crowded around him, Toastpaw fell to the ground and everything went black. A laugh from his brother rang in his mind.



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Look who finally got off her butt and finished this! It's not the best chapter, but I'm okay with it, kinda...

[Foxpaw]

Chapter 10: Happy days! Most likely...


"Toaster? You waking up?.. Please..?"

Toastpaw's eyes fluttered open, he was lying down in the Medicine Cat's den. He could see Budlight curled up in the corner, looking better than he had been a few moons ago. Normaltail stared right into his red eyes. "Toastfire, you're awake! Finally!" The grey she-cat smacked him lightly with her tail. "You had me worried sick! This is the second time you've had a coma in two moons! It's been three days!"
The tom looked confused, "... Toastfire?"
"Yeah, Goodstar gave you your warrior name because we were running out of warriors. He also made Newsky and Lizardsneeze warriors, congrats by the way... But yeah, what exactly happened?"
Toastfire struggled to get up, Monkeytail entered the den. The brown she-cat looked depressed, she must of known about her sister and Bloodclaw. Oh Starclan, how was Stevehawk? The tom was shaking as he spoke, "Breadclaw killed them, bunnies ate them... He mentioned bringing justice to the clans..." He stopped shaking as Budlight spoke, Monkeytail flinched. "That boy is in over his head, he'll destroy the clans if this is justice. He's making more chaos than revenge." The tom's words were slurred, and he fell asleep. The older medicine cat looked at Normaltail with wide purple eyes and took Budlight by the scruff. "I... I think he's fine now..." She murmured, and quickly dragged him out.

Normaltail and Toastfire were left alone.
"Um... Are you okay..? Do you think you can go to the gathering? Or hunt?" Normaltail asked, oddly quiet. Toastfire forced himself out the exit of the den, "I'll see if I can go on a walk... I need time to think-"
"Wait, I'm coming with you. You're not going alone with Breadclaw running around." The medicine cat interrupted. Toastfire thought, and hesitantly nodded in agreement. "Okay, let's go..."

--Woopity Woo--

Toastfire found it hard to concentrate. He was a warrior, Breadclaw just killed two clanmates, and the gathering was soon. How will the clans react to all the drama in Thunderclan? He decided to speak to his companion. "Hey Normaltail, do you have a lot on your mind?"
"Kinda... All of this is making me think of Plumpaw, that hyper ball of fur... She reminded me of Gleamstar, remember those stories?"
"Yeah, along with Tigerstar and Firestar."
"Yeah, I always thought she was meant for great things, and then all of that future was taken away in a heartbeat. I tried to talk to Shiningbeauty about it, but she didn't want to speak of her. She's obsessed with Ricetooth's life right now. I guess she doesn't want to lose her son in a battle like Plumpaw... I just wish I could really get to know my parents... Goodstar is always busy."
"Norma, you really need to meet them. They're good cats, as far as I can see. Just try and start some kind of conversation with them. That's what happened between me and my father..."
Normaltail sighed, and lowered her tail. She started to walk faster. "Can we not talk right now? I don't want to let this conversation get me all sad and regretful."
"Can I tell you something happy then?"
The grey tabby paused, and sighed. "Sure."
Toastfire hesitated, and spoke. "I'm glad we're friends, it's nice to know I can talk to somebody through all of these events-"
"I want to be more than friends!" Normaltail interrupted. It only took a second for her to realize what she had said, and she sprinted off in embarrassment. Toastfire panicked, for he worried for any cat's safety when they run off, and sprinted after her. He felt weakness and pain in his body, but he ignored it as he ran.

Toastfire finally stopped, Normaltail was sitting by a river that served as the border to Riverclan. The tabby tom paused, thought, and stepped forwards. "Normaltail, what did you mean by-"
"I like you. I know, really cheesy, but it's true." The she-cat huffed, she looked like she was going to cry. "I know you're probably too wrapped up in the current events, and I admire you for pushing through them. But I don't want to get in the way..."
It was Toastfire's turn to interrupt. "Norma, I... Like you too."
"You don't have to say that to make me feel better."
"But I'm speaking the truth, Norma. I admire you too. I know we're really young, but we can make it work... If this is a stupid decision, I can't see why."
Normaltail couldn't speak, her throat was dry. Toastfire set his face in her neck fur, comforting her. "Calm down, please..."
The medicine cat laughed. "I find it funny how the cat who's had it worse is the better cat and the one comforting me..."
"My pain made me want to help other's pain."




EDIT: Okay... I'm just here to say that Breadkit's Legacy is being continued on Fanfiction.com, since I'm not posting eight more chapters on this inactive thread anymore

The continuation can be found here