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Post by Morningdew on Sept 14, 2010 22:36:40 GMT -6
Thanks^.^ and of course i will read yours!
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 16, 2010 22:41:39 GMT -6
Chapter 9 is up!!! I can't believe im on chapter 10^.^
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 18, 2010 22:01:30 GMT -6
For anyone who actually cares chapter 10 is up...
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 18, 2010 22:08:00 GMT -6
Awesome! Now do me a favor and give MINE some constructive criticism! (By the way, if you ever plan on thi being a real book, i would suggest putting more into it.)
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 18, 2010 22:10:36 GMT -6
(More into it?) Ok don't worry i will!
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 18, 2010 22:11:25 GMT -6
As in, the chapters aren't very long. Chapter 10 might take up one page! xD
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Firekit
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~My step sister is Morningdew~ "Fight fire with fire."Unknown author.[Mo0:0]
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Post by Firekit on Sept 18, 2010 23:34:19 GMT -6
Morningdew~Oh yah i see what your getting at, yah i know but im probably adding more to the short chapters they were just kinda done quickly.
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 18, 2010 23:40:55 GMT -6
Kay, i see! ^^
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Firekit
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~My step sister is Morningdew~ "Fight fire with fire."Unknown author.[Mo0:0]
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Post by Firekit on Sept 18, 2010 23:56:10 GMT -6
Morningdew~Can you say which ones are too short? I just need to know thats all.
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 19, 2010 0:01:21 GMT -6
9 and 10 are pretty short, the rest are okay if you are planning on it being a short book. Did you read mine yet? Argh...I'm sooooo tired...loads of hmwrk tomorrow!
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 19, 2010 0:03:18 GMT -6
Ok i will work on those two, and yah ive read some of it, im going to read all of it later^.^
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 19, 2010 0:04:17 GMT -6
Thanks....*yawn* I'll talk tomorrow! (hopefully!)
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 19, 2010 15:04:35 GMT -6
Ok^.^ ALL EDITS ARE UP! Please re read for parts of the story i added in!
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Iguanakit
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Reminds everyone of an iguana. Flicks his tongue out and crosses eyes.
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Post by Iguanakit on Sept 19, 2010 16:09:47 GMT -6
It's yummeh.
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 19, 2010 16:12:50 GMT -6
Thanks? I think....
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