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Post by perceus500 on Jan 26, 2011 15:20:29 GMT -6
Yes, I am writing a book. However, it's logged in at Worthy Of Publishing. Actually, the link to that site was placed here, and that's what started me. Anyway, just go to the site, look up Indigo (<< my Pen Name), and read Indigo High. Feel free to give me constructive critisism in this thread about it. Thanks :) |
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Post by Fernpelt on Jan 26, 2011 18:47:01 GMT -6
If you publish this book, I will most definitely buy it. You are my luffley buddy! :3
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Post by perceus500 on Jan 26, 2011 18:58:43 GMT -6
Yay! Thanks so much. But what do you think of it?
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Post by Swiftbite on Jan 26, 2011 19:01:00 GMT -6
OMG! Im writing a book  idk what to call it tho |
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Post by Fernpelt on Jan 26, 2011 19:37:55 GMT -6
Sorry, forgot to say THAT part. I guess I would say that it needs more description, right now it's very direct. If, say, it was a journal, it would be okay to have chapters as short as that with not so much description, but I think you need to delve more into charcterization and such. As someone else said, there are ways to make it flow better. The concept of the book, however, is very good. If you did want to publish it,. however, you would have to take out some curse words for it to qualify as a children's book. As a YA book...I guess you could leave it in.
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Post by perceus500 on Jan 26, 2011 19:41:02 GMT -6
It's not a children's book. Why do you think that it's R13 rated?
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Post by Fernpelt on Jan 26, 2011 19:51:00 GMT -6
>.< I know, I was just saying that if you wanted it to also be available to children, if you published it, then you'd have an even bigger audience for reading it, but if you didn't want it to be a children's book, too, then it was fine.
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Post by perceus500 on Jan 26, 2011 19:53:56 GMT -6
True...actually, it sort of can't be a children's book, because it's basically a mirror image of my life. But, you know, with more powers. Plus, it's a tad too scatterbrained and teenage-hormone-charged to be understood by anyone other than adolescents and adults. But whatever; there could always just be a mini-series for children based off of it.
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Post by Fernpelt on Jan 26, 2011 19:55:58 GMT -6
OKay, that could always be something you could work on. Maybe a sort of comic book? You know, like a regular book but with more manga pictures here and there?
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Post by perceus500 on Jan 26, 2011 19:58:09 GMT -6
Yeah...that could always work. (BTW, I made you a Janitor on IH)
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idk what to call it tho