Post by Beechstar on Aug 2, 2016 23:47:50 GMT -6
"Run!"
Beech could hear his brother yelling behind him. He dashed down the Thunderpath, his heart racing as at the same speed of the monsters racing just inches away from his pelt. The young tom quickly glanced over his shoulder to see his birthplace far in the distance. He had never been this far from the alley! He had no idea where he was or where he was going.
A strange green substance was under his paws now. It was much more squishy and softer than the concrete he was used to. Grass. It's called grass. Beech thought, trying to distract himself from reality. The ginger cat gasped when his brother ran past him, darting off path into some trees. He hesitated for a moment, but was encouraged to follow him when he heard hisses and growls only tail-lengths away.
Beech burst through some tall grass and saw nothing but rows of trees. He panicked, his amber eyes scanning this new environment. Did his brother leave him behind?
His ears moved towards a jingling noise. Beech scowled when he realized it was his brother's collar. The young cat followed the sound of the bell and found his brother hiding in a bush. "I can't believe it, but I was actually happy for a moment when I heard that dumb thing."
His brother ignored him and glanced down at Beech's shoulder. "You're hurt." He leaned over and began to lick the blood off of his younger brother. The ginger cat pulled away violently.
"It's not the time for that! They might have followed us here!" He hissed, pushing his brother's muzzle away with his paw. "Besides, you're not my mother!"
There was hurt in those big green eyes now. Beech shuffled his paws and winced when he finally felt the pain in his shoulder. He felt bad for snapping, but he certainly wasn't going to apologize. Their mother had died only days ago. His older brother seemed to be the only one who cared. It's not my fault she gave me away like a piece of garbage!
His brother tensed beside him when pawsteps broke leaves near them. The two darted out of the bush in the opposite direction, running through an unfamiliar forest. Beech heard something in the distance. It sounded almost like rain hitting the concrete then draining into the ground, but faster. That noise was drowned out by the bell going wild on his brother's neck.
Beech saw that the trees were thinning and the terrain was getting much rockier. He had never seen rocks this big! They seemed to growing out of the ground like the plants his brother's Upwalker had. Not that he would miss those fleshy things. Always yelling for his brother and trying to put their weird hairless paws on Beech's back. He was angry just thinking about it.
His brother leaped onto one of the rocks and didn't seem to wait on him, disappearing into what looked like a hole in the rock growing out of the ground. Beech concentrated all of his strength into his hind legs and leaped. His back paws scratched desperately at the edge of the rock when he almost didn't make it.
He ran into the darkness.
No...there was a light at the end of the darkness. Beech ran toward it, thinking his brother would do the same. He jumped into the light but landed into a gray pelt. The two brother rolled roughly against the rock and meowed in pain until they stopped. Beech pushed himself off to see that they had no where to go. The rock ended on this side of the cave and below it was the sound of rushing rain. Beech cautiously padded over to the edge to see water pumping through rapidly. He laid his ears back in fright. It was stronger than the water that came out of the gutters!
He felt his brother wrap around him protectively. Beech's head whipped toward the sound of more cats.
"Back away, Dog!" His brother growled, unsheathing his claws. "You don't have to do this!"
A dark brown tom advanced toward them. He said nothing as he bared his teeth. A silver she-cat and a scarred dark tom joined Dog's side. The silver she-cat frowned when her eyes met Beech's. The young tom hissed at her that she was a traitor. The scarred tom spat in Beech's direction.
"You're one to talk, runt! Your littermate is following command! As should you!" The scarred tom yowled and pushed past Dog. "Let me finish him off if you don't want to, Dog."
"Over my dead body." His brother hissed, making his fur expand to twice its size. Dog's yellow eyes narrowed. "You know that's not necessary, Raccoon."
"Don't call me that!" His brother hissed and padded in front of Beech. "That's not my name anymore!"
Dog's whiskers twitched. "Oh? Did your Upwalkers name you something else?" The scarred tom laughed tauntingly at Dog's remark. His brother growled and leaped onto the scarred tom. Claws dug into the scarred tom's back as his brother held on. The tom rolled over and knocked his brother onto the rock.
The scarred tom turned to slash his brother in the face, but his brother was quicker. The gray tom bit the other between his shoulder and his neck.
Beech flinched when he felt eyes on him. Dog's yellow eyes burned through him, but the tom didn't move. Just watched him. Beech suddenly felt really small and he fell down to his belly in intimidation. Why is he just staring at me? He was sent to kill me!
"Stop! You're going to kill Spike!" The she-cat screamed, joining the fight and separating the scarred tom from his brother.
"Isn't that today's goal? Murder of the innocent?" Blood dripped from his brother's mouth.
Spike leaned against the she-cat and only glared at them. Dog rose to his feet again and moved closer to his brother. The gray tom only moved back to the edge with his younger sibling. Beech's tail was now dangling off.
The young tom pressed into his brother's fur in fear.
"Will you stop at nothing?" His brother asked. Dog narrowed his eyes. His brother lowered his head. "Fine. You kill him, you have to kill me too. That's what a real family would do."
Dog lost his composure and tackled Raccoon. The force pushed Beech entirely off of the rock and into the rushing water.
He screamed into the liquid as it carried him. He pawed around wildly, trying to find something to latch his claws onto. He began to grow tired and his efforts to be free of the water seemed useless. Darkness was closing in on all sides of him. Beech's eyes closed and he felt nothing.
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Paws pushed down on his stomach and a hot sensation filled his throat. Beech vomited water before him and his eyes shot open. They were the only thing he could move. His body felt so weak and exhausted. He couldn't move.
A light gray tom with green eyes was peering down at him. "Are you okay?" Beech made a face of disgust when he smelled his breath. What had this cat been eating? Rotten chicken? He shifted his eyes to the side and saw three more cats. Two young cats that were probably his age stood behind a much larger brown tabby tom.
"Ungrateful brat. It won't even speak to you." The tabby tom rolled his eyes. "We should have just left it."
"That's breaking the warrior code, Shrewbreaker!" One of the younger cats, a calico she-cat chirped in. "No warrior can neglect a kit in pain or danger, even if the kit is from a different Clan!" The apprentice recited, earning another eye roll from Shrewbreaker.
"I swear every day Oakpaw starts to sound more like you, Ghostwhisper." Shrewbreaker's voice was full with sarcasm. The light gray tom only smiled. "I've taught her well."
The other apprentice padded excitedly over to Beech and Ghostwhisper. "Are you a kit from Rockclan? O-or are you from Fireclan? You kinda look like Squirrelpelt! If you squint." The warrior gently pushed her away. "Give him some space, Leopardpaw."
"I'm not a kit." Beech clawed at the dirt below him. "I'm not from Fireclan or Rockclan. What are you bee-brains even talking about? And why are your names so weird?" Ghostwhisper only smiled when Beech became fiesty.
"Aw, he's got an attitude like you, Shrewbreaker." That got a giggle from Leopardpaw.
Beech tried to rise to his paws, but his muscles refused. Ghostwhisper must have saw his struggle because he leaned over and grabbed Beech by the scruff like a mother would. The young tom managed to get to his paws, but his legs felt like stones.
"We found you stuck on a branch near the river. Well...Oakpaw did. She saved your life." The calico apprentice shyly turned her head as Ghostwhisper spoke. There was a long, awkward pause. "Are you alone?"
Beech stared down at his paws. Had his brother fallen into the river too? Had Dog killed him? He suddenly felt really alone without the sound of the bell. "Yes.."
"What's your name, kid?" Shrewbreaker meowed, trying to get to the point.
Beech swallowed. "It's Beech. Like the tree." The two warriors exchanged glances. "That almost sounds like a clan name!" Ghostwhisper commented with a smile. Beech shook his head. "No, my mother gave me that name. Did a clan give you your name?"
Ghostwhisper nodded. "Yep! Spiritstar gave me my name when I became an official warrior. We used to be rogues like you." He referred to his brother. "Would you like to meet her and have a dry place to sleep?"
Beech thought about the alley. How cold and dangerous it always was. The only way you could stay warm was if you curled up with another cat. He used to have his brother for that. Now he had no one. His voice cracked in emotion as he answered. "I guess."
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-Drew Notes-
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH this one is finished. I decided to start this series of little writings because I miss my baby boy being alive. I'd also like to point out that I started this originally a few days ago. I had a post that was 3,000+ words about how Beech boy became a leader and the page "timed out" and deleted everything.
I screamed a lot.
Anyway, please leave some criticism. I might even take some requests if you're interested! Next will be the nine lives ceremony...hopefully.
Beech could hear his brother yelling behind him. He dashed down the Thunderpath, his heart racing as at the same speed of the monsters racing just inches away from his pelt. The young tom quickly glanced over his shoulder to see his birthplace far in the distance. He had never been this far from the alley! He had no idea where he was or where he was going.
A strange green substance was under his paws now. It was much more squishy and softer than the concrete he was used to. Grass. It's called grass. Beech thought, trying to distract himself from reality. The ginger cat gasped when his brother ran past him, darting off path into some trees. He hesitated for a moment, but was encouraged to follow him when he heard hisses and growls only tail-lengths away.
Beech burst through some tall grass and saw nothing but rows of trees. He panicked, his amber eyes scanning this new environment. Did his brother leave him behind?
His ears moved towards a jingling noise. Beech scowled when he realized it was his brother's collar. The young cat followed the sound of the bell and found his brother hiding in a bush. "I can't believe it, but I was actually happy for a moment when I heard that dumb thing."
His brother ignored him and glanced down at Beech's shoulder. "You're hurt." He leaned over and began to lick the blood off of his younger brother. The ginger cat pulled away violently.
"It's not the time for that! They might have followed us here!" He hissed, pushing his brother's muzzle away with his paw. "Besides, you're not my mother!"
There was hurt in those big green eyes now. Beech shuffled his paws and winced when he finally felt the pain in his shoulder. He felt bad for snapping, but he certainly wasn't going to apologize. Their mother had died only days ago. His older brother seemed to be the only one who cared. It's not my fault she gave me away like a piece of garbage!
His brother tensed beside him when pawsteps broke leaves near them. The two darted out of the bush in the opposite direction, running through an unfamiliar forest. Beech heard something in the distance. It sounded almost like rain hitting the concrete then draining into the ground, but faster. That noise was drowned out by the bell going wild on his brother's neck.
Beech saw that the trees were thinning and the terrain was getting much rockier. He had never seen rocks this big! They seemed to growing out of the ground like the plants his brother's Upwalker had. Not that he would miss those fleshy things. Always yelling for his brother and trying to put their weird hairless paws on Beech's back. He was angry just thinking about it.
His brother leaped onto one of the rocks and didn't seem to wait on him, disappearing into what looked like a hole in the rock growing out of the ground. Beech concentrated all of his strength into his hind legs and leaped. His back paws scratched desperately at the edge of the rock when he almost didn't make it.
He ran into the darkness.
No...there was a light at the end of the darkness. Beech ran toward it, thinking his brother would do the same. He jumped into the light but landed into a gray pelt. The two brother rolled roughly against the rock and meowed in pain until they stopped. Beech pushed himself off to see that they had no where to go. The rock ended on this side of the cave and below it was the sound of rushing rain. Beech cautiously padded over to the edge to see water pumping through rapidly. He laid his ears back in fright. It was stronger than the water that came out of the gutters!
He felt his brother wrap around him protectively. Beech's head whipped toward the sound of more cats.
"Back away, Dog!" His brother growled, unsheathing his claws. "You don't have to do this!"
A dark brown tom advanced toward them. He said nothing as he bared his teeth. A silver she-cat and a scarred dark tom joined Dog's side. The silver she-cat frowned when her eyes met Beech's. The young tom hissed at her that she was a traitor. The scarred tom spat in Beech's direction.
"You're one to talk, runt! Your littermate is following command! As should you!" The scarred tom yowled and pushed past Dog. "Let me finish him off if you don't want to, Dog."
"Over my dead body." His brother hissed, making his fur expand to twice its size. Dog's yellow eyes narrowed. "You know that's not necessary, Raccoon."
"Don't call me that!" His brother hissed and padded in front of Beech. "That's not my name anymore!"
Dog's whiskers twitched. "Oh? Did your Upwalkers name you something else?" The scarred tom laughed tauntingly at Dog's remark. His brother growled and leaped onto the scarred tom. Claws dug into the scarred tom's back as his brother held on. The tom rolled over and knocked his brother onto the rock.
The scarred tom turned to slash his brother in the face, but his brother was quicker. The gray tom bit the other between his shoulder and his neck.
Beech flinched when he felt eyes on him. Dog's yellow eyes burned through him, but the tom didn't move. Just watched him. Beech suddenly felt really small and he fell down to his belly in intimidation. Why is he just staring at me? He was sent to kill me!
"Stop! You're going to kill Spike!" The she-cat screamed, joining the fight and separating the scarred tom from his brother.
"Isn't that today's goal? Murder of the innocent?" Blood dripped from his brother's mouth.
Spike leaned against the she-cat and only glared at them. Dog rose to his feet again and moved closer to his brother. The gray tom only moved back to the edge with his younger sibling. Beech's tail was now dangling off.
The young tom pressed into his brother's fur in fear.
"Will you stop at nothing?" His brother asked. Dog narrowed his eyes. His brother lowered his head. "Fine. You kill him, you have to kill me too. That's what a real family would do."
Dog lost his composure and tackled Raccoon. The force pushed Beech entirely off of the rock and into the rushing water.
He screamed into the liquid as it carried him. He pawed around wildly, trying to find something to latch his claws onto. He began to grow tired and his efforts to be free of the water seemed useless. Darkness was closing in on all sides of him. Beech's eyes closed and he felt nothing.
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Paws pushed down on his stomach and a hot sensation filled his throat. Beech vomited water before him and his eyes shot open. They were the only thing he could move. His body felt so weak and exhausted. He couldn't move.
A light gray tom with green eyes was peering down at him. "Are you okay?" Beech made a face of disgust when he smelled his breath. What had this cat been eating? Rotten chicken? He shifted his eyes to the side and saw three more cats. Two young cats that were probably his age stood behind a much larger brown tabby tom.
"Ungrateful brat. It won't even speak to you." The tabby tom rolled his eyes. "We should have just left it."
"That's breaking the warrior code, Shrewbreaker!" One of the younger cats, a calico she-cat chirped in. "No warrior can neglect a kit in pain or danger, even if the kit is from a different Clan!" The apprentice recited, earning another eye roll from Shrewbreaker.
"I swear every day Oakpaw starts to sound more like you, Ghostwhisper." Shrewbreaker's voice was full with sarcasm. The light gray tom only smiled. "I've taught her well."
The other apprentice padded excitedly over to Beech and Ghostwhisper. "Are you a kit from Rockclan? O-or are you from Fireclan? You kinda look like Squirrelpelt! If you squint." The warrior gently pushed her away. "Give him some space, Leopardpaw."
"I'm not a kit." Beech clawed at the dirt below him. "I'm not from Fireclan or Rockclan. What are you bee-brains even talking about? And why are your names so weird?" Ghostwhisper only smiled when Beech became fiesty.
"Aw, he's got an attitude like you, Shrewbreaker." That got a giggle from Leopardpaw.
Beech tried to rise to his paws, but his muscles refused. Ghostwhisper must have saw his struggle because he leaned over and grabbed Beech by the scruff like a mother would. The young tom managed to get to his paws, but his legs felt like stones.
"We found you stuck on a branch near the river. Well...Oakpaw did. She saved your life." The calico apprentice shyly turned her head as Ghostwhisper spoke. There was a long, awkward pause. "Are you alone?"
Beech stared down at his paws. Had his brother fallen into the river too? Had Dog killed him? He suddenly felt really alone without the sound of the bell. "Yes.."
"What's your name, kid?" Shrewbreaker meowed, trying to get to the point.
Beech swallowed. "It's Beech. Like the tree." The two warriors exchanged glances. "That almost sounds like a clan name!" Ghostwhisper commented with a smile. Beech shook his head. "No, my mother gave me that name. Did a clan give you your name?"
Ghostwhisper nodded. "Yep! Spiritstar gave me my name when I became an official warrior. We used to be rogues like you." He referred to his brother. "Would you like to meet her and have a dry place to sleep?"
Beech thought about the alley. How cold and dangerous it always was. The only way you could stay warm was if you curled up with another cat. He used to have his brother for that. Now he had no one. His voice cracked in emotion as he answered. "I guess."
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-Drew Notes-
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH this one is finished. I decided to start this series of little writings because I miss my baby boy being alive. I'd also like to point out that I started this originally a few days ago. I had a post that was 3,000+ words about how Beech boy became a leader and the page "timed out" and deleted everything.
I screamed a lot.
Anyway, please leave some criticism. I might even take some requests if you're interested! Next will be the nine lives ceremony...hopefully.